Main | Desolate »

February 21, 2004



Dear One,

You have been writing poetry since you were a little girl. Complicated, simple, you've written it all. Impresses me greatly. Don't ask why your imagination has been your escape. It is God's way of helping us cope. It is a great thing, imagination. It is "Drop Dead Fred".
I love your imagination. From your mommy.


Wow! You are amazing!

I didn't know you had all this talent. T-shirt babe model, writer, CPA, ....What next?

I know, SarahK for president.

But seriously, I like your poetry.
I used to write alot of poetry when I was younger.
Usually something tragic inspired me.
Wish I had chose it over the other destructive things I did to escape. oh well, live and learn.

Keep up the great work!

Poet Don't Realize It

Your poetry's just fine...!

You should credit your lines that include "anybody want a peanut" to where you probably heard them - "The Princess Bride." Then, it won't be plagiarism...

Keep ritin'

d.l. stephens

pretty good stuff if i may say so. can't tell if you are male or female by your it is rathergender nebulous unless i missed something,nevertheless, pretty good talent you've got there. I've been writing poetry for forty years, not that that makes me any good,but if you are curious i would be glad to give you a sample.

D L Stephens

Having gone farther down the page I now realize that you are a young woman. Please excuse me.I would just like to say that your writing is quite excellent. Not many people can connect with or express their feelings like you. Bravo! To you! Sincrer, D. L. Stephens.


paleosympathy tiramisu shoe
vison optrics beatings & you

masonry toerags blitzkrieg anew
acetate plywood hatred & few

lightshield bravado orient-display
superimposed porcupine meathook & stay

hoodwink & lecher, verbally crude
ribald formica beatings & you



Just thought I'd tip you off to the audio streams of Jason Mraz's new single 'Geek In the Pink' off his album Mr.A-Z.  Feel free to post it or pass it along.




Well I forgot to include the links:

Doctors Spank Wives

hmm. amazing

The comments to this entry are closed.

more of the muser


  • Amazon Honor System Click Here to Pay Learn More

tiny fragments of perfection

  • if i was all the colors, i would paint you pretty in gold in a picture. (jason mraz/zero percent interest).

  • as i took him in my arms he screamed i'm not insane i'm just looking for someone to understand my pain... (five for fighting/the devil in the wishing well)

  • only the curious have something to find (nickel creek/this side)

  • you dream of colors that have never been made, you imagine songs that have never been played (this side/nickel creek)

  • it's when you cry just a little but you laugh in the middle that you've made it (jason mraz/tonight, not again)

  • don't try to fix me, i'm not broken (evanescence/hello)

another whole box of pandora's

  • i'm not the kind of man who tends to socialize/ i seem to lean on old familiar ways/ and i ain't no fool for love songs that whisper in my ears/ still crazy after all these years (paul simon / still crazy after all these years)

  • but there's something in the way you laugh that makes me feel like a child... aspects of life they confuse me, you and your thesis amuse me... after and afternoon with you... and your rich brown eyes your lips and your dark hair, elbows and exposed knees tossing toward the ceiling... after an afternoon... (jason mraz/ after an afternoon)

a long awaited end

  • face to palm... tear to tear... mouth to tongue... heart to ground... i am in love... (jason mraz/ after an afternoon)

  • there's no place to hide but i don't think i'm scared. (nickel creek/this side)

  • with a broken wing, she carries her dreams. man you oughta see her fly. (a broken wing / martina mcbride)

zero percent mine

  • all lyrics headers are lifted from my pretend boyfriend jason mraz's "zero percent interest"